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 Through Her Vampire Eyes

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PostSubject: Through Her Vampire Eyes   Sun May 09, 2010 3:15 am

*Takes place between New Moon and Eclipse*
*WARNING: Do not read if you are against same-sex relationships scratch that DON'T Talk to me*

PLEASE tell me what you think I want honest criticism

Backstory (I have chapters one and two written but do you like this)

Bella it means beautiful in Italian. What a fitting name the way her hair curled softly and bounced in the wind the way the clothes she wore fit. How they hugged her curves loosely. Her pantts how they hugged her hips in a flattering but not sexual way How she wore so little make up and it suited her. The way the blush crept on to her cheeks easily. The adorable clumsiness. The way she spoke so kindly to everyone even Rosalie, who quite frankly is a BITCH to her! Why oh Why can't she love me like I love her
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PostSubject: Re: Through Her Vampire Eyes   Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:33 pm

Please continue! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Through Her Vampire Eyes   Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:56 pm

Its really good!

If Heaven and Hell decide
That they both are satisfied
Illuminate the NOs on their vacancy signs

If there's no one beside you
When your soul embarks
Then I'll follow you into the dark

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